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Tuesday, January 4, 2011

Description Essay Sample

MY  TEACHER

Author : Ai Siti Lisma

I’d like to tell you about someone who taught me religious knowledge in the mosque since I was the sixth class of elementary school until the second class of senior high school. Because I don’t have a photo, I am going to describe that someone. He is a boy with straight short hair, an oval face and almond shaped eyes. He has got a tanned complexion, jug ears, a pointed nose, a plump body, and his height is tall. He is Yudhi Permana. He was born in Garut on July 2nd, 1979. He was educated at Gajah Mada University, Yogyakarta. He took Indonesia School of Letters. He left Yogyakarta in 2003.
            He is a teacher. First, he teaches in SMA 1 Muhammadiyah, Kadungora; then, he teaches in SMA 1 Leles. Beside he taught me religious knowledge, he taught me Arabic. He is smart because he always got scholarship when he was student in university. As I know, he is from poor family, but he has spirit for studying, seeking knowledge and putting his knowledge to use for society. I can read Holy Quran because he always help me in order to be able reading correctly. That’s great, I can read Holy Quran step by step with knowing “Tajwid”. I began his student six years ago. When the first times I was taught by him, I didn’t know anything even though I felt very stupid student because I couldn’t read Holy Quran with “Tajwid” and Arabic. His teaching way  is good. It’s full with discipline, so I had motivation to be able “Tajwid” and Arabic.
            I am very proud with him because he has spirit which always gives to his students. He is decisive, discipline and responsible. He handles his students same. If they do the mistake, he always gives punishment. I remember when I did the mistake. I ever came late, and I gave punishment. My ear was pulled by him. It’s no problem because make me afraid of don’t do it. I am happy if he is sharing with students. He is humorous person. If he is teaching, he is serious person.  
            Now, he is my neighbor because he lives in nearby my house. He has got married. His wife is Ida Hindasyah. She is a teacher in elementary school. They have had two small daughter. 

Making A Paragraph

MY WRITING ASSIGNMENT
By Ai Siti Lisma


Those assignments were wrote since I was in the third term. I put the mark in each paragraph because I just want to remember the score what I got.. :)










Score : Good
                The third floor of Scott’s sells house hold appliances. As you enter the store through the main entrance, the furniture department is directly in front of you in the middle of the store. The toy shop is located in the right corner beside the elevator. The lamp department is on the right the carpet shop. The bath shop is on the left between kitchen equipment and electrical appliances. The carpet shop is behind the furniture department in front of the kitchen equipment.

Score : Good
Dr. Alden who directs on English language school has planning on Tuesday, February 21. First, at 8.30 to 9.00 she greets new students. Then at 9.00 to 10.30 she gives a test to new studentds. After taht, at 10.30 to 1.30 she orders new text books. At 11.30 to 12.00 she makes phone calls. Next, at 12.00 to 1.00 the students have lunch with teachers. Finally, at 1.00 to 3.00 she observes closses.

Score : Good
Vicki is having a birthday dinner for her friend. First, she buys food for dinner at supermarket. Then, she picks up birthday cake at bakery. Before the beginning of the party, she has to clean the house. After that, she makes dinner. Next, she wraps presents. Finally, she sets table.

Score : Good
                I have several positive effects of choosing a career as a translator and a government empolyee  in tourism. First of all, we can get more knowledge. We can also learn English more comprehensively because to be a translator learns about the meaning of words, so we can understand the text. Then, to be a government employee in tourism, we will meet foreigners from other countries, so we can practice to speak English fluently. Most importantly, we will get enough salary from both of them, so it can be used for family’s needs.

Score : Fair
Putut Heru Pratama has worked with us for four years and has made rather good impression. He tends to be smart and critical. Although he is a cooperative person, he is an egoistic person. We have found him, on the whole, to be rather lazy. We feel that he is not admirably suited for the position of doctor with your company. I suggest you to ask him  to be a lawyer because he has a critical character.

Score : Good
                The English Department of POLBAN has a unique in subject. Not only in English subject such as writing, grammar, reading and listening we learn, but we also learn business communication, management and how to use computer software. I think English Department just studies in general subject in English, but we are given the other subject for business. Our knowledge and skill will increase, so we can study English and business easily.

Score : Good
                Summer is my favourite season. It makes me happy because I can enjoy m y vacation especially going to the beach. I can do many activities in summer. I can swim, dive, or sun bath. Beside that, I can enjoy a beautiful scenery at the beach, so it is an interesting season to do whatever I want.

Score : Good
                Mbah Surip is a famous Indonesian singer in 2009 although he was dead. He was born in Mojokerto, on 5 May 1949. Before he became a singer, he had work experiences in a petroleum company and also in foreign countries like Canada, America, and Yordania. Near the end of the  century he began to make a record album whose song was Ijo Royo-Royo, Indonesia I, Reformasi, Tak Gendong, Barang Baru, and Bangun Tidur. In the middle of 2009 he made a video clip of Tak Gendong, and his song has been hit. At the age of 60, he was dead in the way to Pusdikkes TNI AD hospital, Kramat Jati, Jakarta Timur.

Score : Good
                Exercise is necessary for good health. It is important to keep balance for our body. It makes our body strong and immune to disease. Exercise that we do in daily activity are jogging, walking, running, playing badminton, swimming, etc. Exercuse can be done once or twice in a week. We will feel fresh if you do it regularly.

Score : Good
                September is my happiest month because my hope to have a nephew or a niece is answered by my Lord. After Idul Fitri, I got the information that my first elder brother becomes a father because his wife pregnants, and my sacond elder brother has had a baby. His baby is a girl. She was born in Bandung, on 23 September 2009. I realli want to know and meet his daughter. When my nephew and niece have been six months old, I think they are the beautiful baby who has a cute smile.

Score : Good
                My favourite roomin my house is the living room. It is rather big. There are two pairs of big windows in the right wall. Under the two pairs of big windows , the couches fit perfectly. It is really comfortable. Behind the windows, you can see my flowers garden. The left wall is lined with a case where a television is fitted. My family photo is lining on the left wall at the top of the TV. Under the couches, there is a carpet where my family and I sit or sleep to relax while watching TV.

Score : Fair
                It is a traditional house which comes from Padang. It is named Gadang house. If you can see a picture above, it is surrounded by mountains and fields. I in the background there is a lake which runs around the fields. Up on teh mountais there is the cloud whicshelters for the plant in the forest. Fields strech as far as the horizon. Next to the house there is a small woods. On the each side to the left and right the house, you can see cornfields. A path crosses the fields. For a long way off there is a small village which faces in front of a lake. If you are there, you can see the beautiful scenery of the mountains which slope down to the lake.

Score : Good
                Helmi Nopiansyah and Ai Siti Lisma have many things in common. For example, Helmi and Ai graduated from SMP 1 Kadungora, Garut. Helmi and Ai Live in the same village. He does not like seafood, and neither does she. In addition, both of them have the same blood types. They also like watching the Asian plays. Another similarity, between the two people is that they have the same hobbies. They are walking, cycling and swimming. They like them very much. Both of them usually ride bicycle in the morning. Beside their hobbies are same, they have the same character. They are rather selfish, but they are very humorous.

Score : Very Good
Garut Plaza or GP food court is a nice food court to be visited in Garut. It is located near Pasar Baru, six minutes walk from Asia department store. The style is simple and traditional. It has delicious Sundanese food and ice ‘Si Peueut’. For lunch, Its costs Rp 9,000-17,000. There are many kinds of food and also they are healthy for our body although the price is rather expensive. I seldom eat in this place if there are many people because it is too crowded, so the service is slow. Beside music, GP has hotspot area. While listening to the music and eating, you can also browse something in this area.


The Essay

THE BEAUTY OF GARUT

By Ai Siti Lisma
English Department




Garut is one of regencies in Indonesia’s southern West Java province. Garut is a town, with Tasikmalaya Regency to the east, Cianjur Regency and Bandung Regency to the west, Sumedang Regency to the north and Indian Ocean to the south. Its area is 3,065.19. The population is about 2,375, 725 (2006). In general, Garut has a cool but tropical climate. This area includes valley territory surrounded by volcanoes, so the soil is fertile. They are Mount Cikuray, Mount Karacak, Mount Guntur and Mount Papandayan. Streams of solidified lava are present on their slopes. The Garut Regency has two distinct topographical areas. Northern Garut consists of highlands which constitute the largest rice fields in Garut, and southern Garut mostly consists of sloping land and twelve rivers which flow into Indian Ocean. Some known products from Garut are Garut orange fruits, Garut lamb, dodol Garut and batik tulis garutan.
Garut has many facilities such as school, hospital, police station, city square and swimming pool. Many schools are located in Tarogong which is entered city area in Garut. A road crosses this area you can see government offices, hospital, police station and swimming pool. Almost facilities are in Tarogong.

Tourism objects which are more interesting are Cipanas and Cikajang. There are many swimming pools in Cipanas. Many tourists from other city which come there enjoy the hot nature water. Not only tourists from other city but also tourists from other country visit this area. This area is become many people for business with built hotels and the beautiful vacation to be enjoyed. You can feel relaxing your body if you swim there. It’s a nice place. Then there is tourism object the most interesting in Cikajang. It’s tea plantation. If you are there, you can see it which is spread around. The landscape is gentle hills. In Cikajang, there is an area where people enjoy the recreation with a beautiful nature situation. The name of place is Wanagiri. It is entered mountain area. If you are in the peak there, you will feel comfortable. All around there are gentle hills and meadows. Beyond that, waves of Pameungpeuk sea will be seen there. Pameungpeuk sea extends to Indian Ocean. The nearest village is two kilometers away a long a bumpy road. People in there are very friendly. They respect the visitor very much. 

THE ESSAY

The explaination of this essay is retrieved from Chapter 8 page 100-101

Writing an Essay



An essay is a piece of writing several paragraphs long instead of just one or two paragraphs. It is written about one topic, just as a paragraph is. However, the topic of an essay is too complex to discuss in one paragraph. Therefore, you must divide the topic into several paragraphs, one for each major point. Then you must tie all of the separate paragraphs together by adding an introduction and a conclusion.

An essay has three main parts:
1. An introductory paragraph
2. A body(at least one, but usually two or more paragraphs)
3. A concluding paragraph


Types of Essays


There are five types of essays. Following are types of essays:

1. Process is kind of essay which purpose to describe the sequence of steps in a procedure
2. Division and Classification is kind of essay which purpose to describe the logical divisions of a topic or     the parts of an object.
3. Causes and Effects is kind of essay which aim to analyze the causes or effects of a situation
4. Comparison/Contrast is kind of essay which aim to show the qualities that are similar or different between two things.
5. Problem/Solution is kind of essay which purpose to describe a problem and evaluate possible solutions